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May 08, 2005

A poem

On Drinking a Cold One

The coldness you feel in your fingers
is your beer warming up.

Although I wrote that profundity at the little cafe near the end of the walk to the Natural Arch, I promise you that it is not the very very bad poem I mentioned in the previous post. That one has already been buried in a lead-lined container so that its smell won't fell the local wildlife. [Technorati tags: poem DeepThoughts]

Posted by D. Weinberger at May 8, 2005 07:14 PM

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It reads like a very interesting Haiku, in my opinion.

Posted by: betapundit | May 9, 2005 01:28 AM

I woke up this morning and thought that I should have done it as a haiku...and then realized I'd written a "poem" that's too short for a haiku.

Posted by: David Weinberger | May 9, 2005 11:13 AM

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